It’s got to be one of these.

I solved the irritating grass problem by chopping it off. Take that, grass!

Because I do take Michelle’s ideas seriously, I played fonts and locations.  And if I don’t quit playing cover arts, this story is not going to get into readers’ hot little hands again.

BoyNextDoorV3

BoyNextDoorV4

6 responses to “It’s got to be one of these.

  1. I like the second one!

  2. Are we voting? I go with the second one too!

  3. TD O'Malley (LB)

    I like the second one 🙂

  4. Okay, I hear you, and I already know what Michelle will tell me when she toddles by. Guess I better go finish my formatting.

  5. LOL I guess I am in the minority liking the first one!

  6. While I support your original idea of having your name at the top, the second one here distributes the text more attractively. However, I liked the design with his whole body much better. I also liked it in general, not just more than the legless versions. It was fresh and intriguing. You’d have to tweak the text spacing, but it was more interesting as an image and could make me more likely to think the story was something special. (Okay, maybe I’m overreacting and just like a man in jeans. Don’t know.) On the first one, I’d move the title text away from the left edge.

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